MP Map WIP: "A Simple Death" - DONE! - (feedback?)

[Dev/Null]

As you may have guessed, this is based loosely on Doom II MAP07: "Dead Simple". I took a few liberties to make it into a deathmatch level. The idea was to keep it small, and fast paced.

http://home.comcast.net/~medieval/personal/mapwip1.jpg


http://home.comcast.net/~medieval/personal/mapwip2.jpg


http://home.comcast.net/~medieval/personal/mapwip3.jpg

I've made some changes since those shots were taken, but the basic layout is there. This will be my first "real" Doom 3 map, as well as the first map of any kind I will be releasing to the public. I guess I'm trying to say: constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, but be gentle! :) [/img]

[Zombie13]

Well its a good start to any mapping carrier, keep me posted, look forward to checking it out :)

ZOmbie

[HeresJohnny]

Looks very nice, a little open could use some cover, but otherwise kudos :)

[Dev/Null]

Map is done!

Well, it was done a week or two ago, but I just finally got around to uploading it somewhere. Go here to download a ZIP file containing the PK4 and a terse readme:
http://medieval.home.comcast.net/personal/simpledeath.zip

I made a few minor changes since the last screenshots, mostly fiddling with the lighting to get better fps. It runs pretty well, except in the far corners of the outside part. I also renamed it to "A Simple Death", and made DEF and GUI files for it.

Comments?

[def46]

Put the ,map in the archive that'll help. ;)

[Dev/Null]

Put the ,map in the archive that'll help. ;)

Whoops! :eek2: Not sure how I managed to do that...

Fixed now.

[Dev/Null]

So... what does everyone think? I promise I won't bump this thread again, but I'd really like some feedback on my first D3 map.

You can download the map from the link above, or from my new page at http://devnull42.home.comcast.net/maps.html